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I do not work for the Wikipedia Tea house, but I had a question of my own to ask there and I saw yours. I'm no great Wikipedia editor, but you may need a source for this statement-Hornaday created specialized marketing campaigns for companies that include Sony, Intel, Lexus, Microsoft, Electronic Arts, Honda, and Nike. Also this statement-According to an August 8, 2013 article in the New York Times, thanks to a viewership of 14.5 million “Teen Beach Movie now comfortably ranks as the No. 2 film in cable television history" and the #1 most watched non-sequel movie in cable television history. It might read more neutral if you were to change the statement to read- According to an August 8, 2013 article in the New York Times, due to a viewership of 14.5 million “Teen Beach Movie now ranks as the No. 2 film in cable television history" and the #1 most watched non-sequel movie in cable television history. In other words, take out the word thanks and use the word due instead, and also remove the word comfortably, since it is a unneeded adjective. I'm not a moderator or anything on Wikipedia, I'm just learning more rules and what that mean. You can take my suggestions with a grain of salt if you like. I won't be offended. Also I grew up watching and loving ABC Afterschool specials! --BeckiGreen (talk) 02:49, 13 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]

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Hello, Jdh3777. Your question has been answered at the Teahouse Q&A board. Feel free to reply there!
Please note that all old questions are archived after 2-3 days of inactivity. Message added by ColinFine (talk) 10:20, 13 August 2013 (UTC). (You can remove this notice at any time by removing the {{teahouse talkback}} template).[reply]