User talk:Jbour46
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Hi,
welcome from your online ambassador. I will be helping out online. My first suggestion is your draft topic. I suggest that you expand its scope to Muruntau Gold Deposit. The reason this is an encyclopedia rather than an academic journal, and as yet there was no article on the topic. All you really need to do is a a few more sentences to give the context and then you can continue with your structural geology writing. Graeme Bartlett (talk) 21:20, 16 October 2012 (UTC)
Thanks for fixing the context to broaden the scope of the article. To fix up your references, the idea is to insert all your elaborated reference templates <ref name="Geochemistry">....</ref> the first time you needed to use them, instead of for example the first <ref name="Geochemistry"/>. That will get the references expanded and the errors removed. Also when you have time link some words with internal wikilinks like Hercynian, particularly those which have articles.
Other possible inclusion are a map, a diagram of the deposit, and tectonic setting, and coordinates of the location. A reference for your first introduction paragraph is needed too! Graeme Bartlett (talk) 09:23, 7 November 2012 (UTC)