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Your submission at Articles for creation: Interactive Health Technologies, LLC (September 15)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by SwisterTwister was:

This submission's references do not adequately show the subject's notability. Wikipedia requires significant coverage about the subject in reliable sources that are independent of the subject—see the guidelines on the notability of organizations and companies and the golden rule. Please improve the submission's referencing (see Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners), so that the information is verifiable, and there is clear evidence of why the subject is notable and worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia. If additional reliable sources cannot be found for the subject, then it may not be suitable for Wikipedia at this time.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Also, because this is essentially still such an advertisement (perhaps the worst is the "mission and vision statement") along with an overall emphasis and overfocus of advertising the services and other company information only of interest to likely clients and investors. Frankly, I would not resubmit as the bottom line here is going to be the fact it's still such a new company (only about 5 years old) so there's still not enough basis to suggest both substance and independent notability for an article.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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SwisterTwister talk 05:07, 15 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Interactive Health Technologies, LLC (November 25)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by SwisterTwister was:

This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Still a blatant advertisement and I'll note all of the concerns; one is that it's largely overfocused as a sales pitch (literally everything in section #2 and after), thus none of that is helping for notability, let alone substance. Focusing with actual major news helps, but never press releases, trivial passing mentions, interviews, company activities or news about funding, partnerships or funding.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Interactive Health Technologies, LLC and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you need any assistance, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk or on the reviewer's talk page.
You can also use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

SwisterTwister talk 04:12, 25 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]

AfC notification: Draft:Interactive Health Technologies, LLC has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Interactive Health Technologies, LLC. Thanks! SwisterTwister talk 19:23, 27 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]

November 2016

You have been blocked indefinitely from editing for violating the Terms of Use regarding undisclosed paid editing. If you think there are good reasons why you should be unblocked, you may request an unblock by first reading the guide to appealing blocks, then adding the following text to the bottom of your talk page: {{unblock|reason=Your reason here ~~~~}}. Huon (talk) 22:53, 27 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft article, Draft:Interactive Health Technologies, LLC

Hello, Jayplotkin. It has been over six months since you last edited your Articles for Creation draft article submission, "Interactive Health Technologies".

In accordance with our policy that Articles for Creation is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been nominated for deletion. If you plan on working on it further, or editing it to address the issues raised if it was declined, simply edit the submission and remove the {{db-afc}} or {{db-g13}} code.

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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Legacypac (talk) 00:45, 16 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]