Jaylin, I think your outline is very detailed and I like how you are planning to add opinions from Taylor's coaches. I think what would really tie together your article is the connection between Taylor's personal life and her softball career. It evident that Taylor's softball life is a part of her personal life, but what would be interesting to see if softball shaped Taylor's personality or something of that nature. Great start! --Frivera14 (talk) 18:50, 9 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]
