User talk:Jaylacnguyen/New York State Council on the Arts/Serena1205 Peer Review
Feedback on Review
[edit]Hi Serena1205!
Your feedback was very detailed and helpful, thank you. I appreciate the edit in the lead section, it reads much smoother now. I find the missing content section also very useful; I have added a few sections that I found useful and informational.
Thank you! Jaylacnguyen (talk) 00:46, 2 November 2024 (UTC)