User talk:Jasonmonroe417/sandbox

Peer Review

Hey Jason! With regards to the peer review, the main thing that stands out is the lack of lead section. Since there does not appear to be any lead section, I highly recommend putting that on the top of the priority list! It seems that you already have mapped out what you want to say, so the lead section should just outline what you already have. Besides that, most of the claims seem well sources, but a few of them in the "Personal Life" section are missing a source. Also, it seems that the "Personal Life" and "Early Life and Marriage" could be one section. Hope this helps! Westinjg (talk) 04:00, 21 November 2016 (UTC)