User talk:Jandpyoung

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Your submission at Articles for creation: Gomori-positive astrocytes (January 23)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Bogger was:

This submission reads more like an essay than an encyclopedia article. Submissions should summarise information in secondary, reliable sources and not contain opinions or original research. Please write about the topic from a neutral point of view in an encyclopedic manner.

The comment the reviewer left was:

-Article lacks a lede (1 - 3 paragraphs giving a basic introduction to the topic. Or the existing 6 paragraphs are not basic enough.

-Reads like an essay (statement-ref. statement-ref. statement-ref. subjective conclusion ("thus" statements) - not ref'd)

- include more wikilinks to existing articles inline

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Gomori-positive astrocytes and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
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Bogger (talk) 11:18, 23 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Jandpyoung! Having an article declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Bogger (talk) 11:18, 23 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Concern regarding Draft:Gomori-positive astrocytes

Hello, Jandpyoung. This is a bot-delivered message letting you know that Draft:Gomori-positive astrocytes, a page you created, has not been edited in at least 5 months. Drafts that have not been edited for six months may be deleted, so if you wish to retain the page, please edit it again or request that it be moved to your userspace.

If the page has already been deleted, you can request it be undeleted so you can continue working on it.

Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 01:03, 15 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]