User talk:Jamiesung6
This user is a student editor in Northwestern_University/Immigration_on_Stage_(Spring_2018) . |
- Hi Jamie, I'm introducing myself as part of the assignment for the editing training. Felicia Oduh (talk) 22:55, 11 April 2018 (UTC)
Christian's Peer Review
[edit]Your article is chalk full of information, but there are some places where your writing seems opinion based.
Introduction: Great, works very well. I would take out the last sentence, it's an explanation we don't need in an intro.
Background: I would take out the last two sentences or rework them - they try to make an argument about how his background does affect his writing without presenting un-opinionated facts/
Acting: Solid. I would take out the what he is most passionate about. It is very telling when the facts should be what present the information to us.
Playwriting: Great, just check grammar.
Where Did We Sit on the Bus?: I think this is the section that needs the most work. Wikipedia seems to want many more facts pertaining to production, not just things on what the play is about. But it's up to you.
Overall good job. — Preceding unsigned comment added by GLChriss111 (talk • contribs) 18:39, 17 May 2018 (UTC)
Image copyright
[edit]Hi! I reviewed the image that you uploaded, File:Brian-Quijada-Headshot.jpg, and didn't see where there was any indication that the image was ever released under a compatible Creative Commons license. I saw "© Victory Gardens 2014-2018", which looks to be the traditional copyright where all rights are reserved by the copyright owner. This means that it's not compatible with Wikimedia Commons, as the copyright prohibits any derivative works or any use that is not permitted by the owner. The only time images can be uploaded to Wikimedia Commons is if they have been released under a copyright that would allow for derivative works and for other people to use the image freely for any purpose, including commercial use. In most cases people who own the rights to an image do not want to release it under a more permissive copyright because it would make it difficult to profit off of the image and to ensure that the image is only used in ways they want (this aspect can be the more important part for some people).
What I need you to do is to review the training module on uploading images and media and to find out if the image has been released under that copyright. If not, the image will have to be removed, unfortunately - Wikipedia and Wikimedia Commons is fairly strict about what can or can't be used and uploaded. Let me know on my talk page if you have any questions. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 13:21, 4 June 2018 (UTC)