User talk:Jalapinata

This user is a student editor in U_of_Maryland/Digital_Rhetoric_(Spring_2021) .

This user is a student editor in U_of_Maryland/Writing_Genres_as_Social_Action_(Fall_2020) .

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 19:10, 10 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Peer Review: Mysogynoir

I chose to review your sandbox draft because I didn't know what the word Mysogynoir meant. Despite the small amount of information in your sandbox draft, I do feel as though I know what the word means now. It looks like so far you have only started to work on the lead, and for the most part it is clear and concise. Your last sentence ends with the word "adultification," I've never heard the word before, and it sounds simple enough to understand, but it may be prudent to provide a link to a Wikipedia article about it attached to the word. Also, the sentence, "Bailey has covered various marginalized communities," just seems to be out of place. It is incredibly vague, and could benefit from specific examples and a citation if you were going to keep it in. However, I think you should remove it because more information about Bailey just doesn't belong in a lead section about misogynoir as it doesn't add any more relevant information about the term. Monkeybomber (talk) 02:39, 29 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

REPLY

Thank you for your input, I know my page is on the skimpy side. I was really intimidated when I did my article and wasn't sure what I wanted to say. I am happy that you learned a new term!

In the meantime, I am going to take your advice and make my page better.

Thanks again, Jalapinata (talk)