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Hi
I really like the structure of the paper since it is so clearly presented with a logical flow that engage the reader.
Also, I like the pictures in the article, which really made the paper much easier to understand.
In addition, the source demonstrated in the end is comprehensive and well illustrated, adding a lot of credibility to the article.
But in the article, if there is more explanation when a jargon is mentioned, it will be great.
When talking about the current design of the plaza, it will great to show some plans if it is accessible.