User talk:Jaccris

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Hello, Jaccris, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 19:36, 9 September 2020 (UTC)

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Hi. It looks like you managed to move your draft to mainspace. I moved it back to Ellie Cohen, since that's the standard way of naming articles.

Your article still needs some important improvements. Right now, almost everything in the article relies on non-independent sources (the Sonoma County Gazette reads like a press release). You need to find two or three independent sources that show she meets Wikipedia's notability requirements. You also need to structure this more like a biography and less like a CV - a biography wouldn't have a section like "Accomplishment at Point Blue Conservation", for example. To help, I have included a link to the Editing Biographies brochure. Try to match your article more to that sort of layout. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 15:26, 26 October 2020 (UTC)

Ellie Cohen moved to draftspace

An article you recently created, Ellie Cohen, does not have enough sources and citations as written to remain published. It needs more citations from reliable, independent sources. (?) Information that can't be referenced should be removed (verifiability is of central importance on Wikipedia). I've moved your draft to draftspace (with a prefix of "Draft:" before the article title) where you can incubate the article with minimal disruption. When you feel the article meets Wikipedia's general notability guideline and thus is ready for mainspace, please click on the "Submit your draft for review!" button at the top of the page. scope_creep^Talk 19:50, 5 November 2020 (UTC)

Concern regarding Draft:Ellie Cohen

Hello, Jaccris. This is a bot-delivered message letting you know that Draft:Ellie Cohen, a page you created, has not been edited in at least 5 months. Draft space is not an indefinite storage location for content that is not appropriate for article space.

If your submission is not edited soon, it could be nominated for deletion under CSD G13. If you would like to attempt to save it, you will need to improve it. You may request userfication of the content if it meets requirements.

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 23:02, 7 April 2021 (UTC)

Your draft article, Draft:Ellie Cohen

Hello, Jaccris. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Ellie Cohen".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been deleted. If you plan on working on it further and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Liz ^{Read! Talk!} 22:58, 5 May 2021 (UTC)