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War Machine from here, 2010-12-07

Items of change:

  • Infobox
    • Layout cleanup of the template
    • Avoid the template redirect
    • Replace caption with {{Descript-cvr-art}}
    • Remove "(as Rhodes)" as redundant
    • {{cn}} middle name
    • Remove non-super hero teams and non-fictional groups
    • Remove teams the character wasn't a member of
    • Simplify millitary trainng comment
    • Remove "Mach 3" - nigh impossible to attribute precise valuse to fictional equipment or abilities.
    • convert to character and title
  • Lead
    • Remove "Rupert" as not part of either common name for the character. Not a bio of a real person, so improper for the lead.
    • "comic book superhero" is redundant in the over all lead. Simplify to "superhero" (also questionable)
    • Clarify credits as per [1] and [2]
    • Remove the "Rhodey" aside
    • Simplify down the IoM paragraph of the lead. This can be expanded in a paragraph in the IoM section or merging the IoM article back in.
    • Expand 2 paragraph to includ rough comic book usage
  • Publication history
    • Expand for real world context of the flow of the character.
    • Place the refs in {{cite web}}
  • Origins
    • Middle name and place of birth removed as irrelvent, or extreamly trivial at best, with in the works of fiction.
    • Copy edit to put into the "ever present now" and remove unneeded detailes.
    • Round out cite

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