User talk:JHogeland/sandbox
Include more background about your topic among the topic of turn based strategy games, because it does not become clear with the topic your are trying to describe. The page layout has to be much better, It needs a title to be more obvious and not to start out with history. You would need to provide a very simple description of what turn biased strategy is. Maybe even provide a picture as an example to further describe your topic. You need to include many more sources at least three more to further improve your essay, as well as providing some examples of how different kinds of turn biased combat games work, and what rules they have to apply to be turn biased combat You need to write alot more to be able to make this a better article, but it's fine so far
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