User talk:J.Vilcek/sandbox
Erin's Peer Review
[edit]The introduction could be stronger just by simply rearranging the sentences but why did you link "historically black college" it is unnecessary since you did not link the black college you are alluding to. The wording in the body could be refined to sound more professional. I also do not see any sources to support any of the facts that are in this wiki page. The only sources used are to define terms or aspects of PASSHE. The "STEM" link does not even take the reader to an appropriate wiki page that relates to what STEM is. You use statistics in the Budget portion however you have no citations to support this budget data. It looks like the structure and organization of this article makes sense but the content just needs to be cited.