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Peer Review

This is a great start! I like that you are adding your own section about fossil fuel phase out to go into more detail about the process. Beyond that, I am not clear as to what other changes were made. It would be helpful to go into more detail about what renewable energy sources are being proposed to take the place of fossil fuels along with how nuclear is or is not a reliable new source.

-Lilli Kashef Hamadani

It looks like you are adding some information about environmental justice to this page, which is great! It would be interesting to have a subsection on the different challenges of moving towards renewable sources in different countries. It could also be interesting to look at small-scale renewable energy in developing countries- where energy costs are unaffordable and people rely on things like biodigesters or small solar installations. Like the person above, I wasn't sure what else you edited, but this is a great start!

- Caroline Hall

Peer review on May 5

Comments from Wentao:

I think maybe you could find some data about different countries to further explain fossil fuels phase-out's impact on different countries, since for some developing countries, a complete fossil fuels phase-out is not applicable. Although the benefits can be somewhat easily seen, but it's hard for them to apply.

Comments from Caroline Hall:

You've done a very nice comphrehensive job of cleaning this article up! It could be helpful when you talk about alternative energies to discuss where they might be most useful. (Developing vs developed countries for example.) For example, you mention biofuels, which are extensively used in Central America, and I believe Africa, but less so in the U.S. because of energy needs and how biofuel is created. (Usually you need lots of agricultural waste, which is more concentrated in the U.S.). Some phase-out plans might be more feasible for some countries more than others. There are some portions of the article where your citations apply to the whole paragraph, and you may need to cite these statistics for each piece of data instead. (Example: Coal statistics)

Comments from jjlennon:

This is a very good expansion to the Fossil fuels phase-out. I think its looks fairly complete, but I agree with the above comments that you could add a bit more information on various countries since the information will be quite different. The equity (who benefits and who doesn't) of the 4e analysis could be expanded on a bit more. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Isolari (talk • contribs) 20:08, 2 May 2017 (UTC)