User talk:Isamouse79/sandbox

Hi! Very wow!!!SocksOfDeath (talk) 16:15, 25 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Good job! In your second paragraph, I believe "she" in the first sentence shouldn't be capitalized. Also, maybe find the names and professions of her other siblings if possible! Also, maybe talk about how she met her husband, like maybe they met through medical school or through being doctors. Looks great though! — Preceding unsigned comment added by 128.164.227.84 (talk) 13:29, 1 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Let's be honest here, you are a writer. We are all aware. I have no critiques.SocksOfDeath (talk) 15:44, 1 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Great work! I think you can add more pictures of Elizabeth Gould Bell during different period.Koko413 (talk) 16:00, 3 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Wow i think this is really good work. You expand very well on each topic and all of it flows very well while remaining relevant. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Wohlina (talk • contribs) 16:08, 3 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Great job! I liked your work a lot. You can add more information on how she met her husband and got together. ChristalCao (talk) 16:10, 3 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

I really like the sentence structure and it is definitely fact driven. There is a lot of information but I feel like you could maybe go more in depth with different parts. I think adding photos would help to strengthen the page a little bit more but i think overall it looks really good! Isabelleshegog (talk) 16:12, 3 April 2019 (UTC)Isabelle[reply]

Great job! I think you are already doing a excellent work. I prefer your format and the way you illustrate the information, and your information is just like a nice wikipedia page. Samuelzhao000005 (talk) 16:18, 3 April 2019 (UTC)Samuelzhao000005[reply]

Great job! very professional looking wiki page and good sources so far! (Jackson Yang) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ilikesleeping1 (talk • contribs) 16:25, 3 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Amazing job on your page! Your topic is very unique and I can tell that you put a lot of thought and clarity to your page. One suggestion I have is maybe including more information in the caption portion of your image of Elizabeth Gould Bell (for example, birth, etc.) Otherwise, keep up the great work! Fariha34 (talk) 16:27, 3 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Very good job!! I liked the topic that you chose, and I think it is very fact-driven. I liked the way that you clarify whether is your work or not, but I think you should find another way to express this. Rafamatalon1234 (talk) 17:36, 3 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Great job! I think you used the Wikipedia quick links very effectively. The information is presented in a very logical and organized manner. Lorenaramirezl (talk) 22:28, 5 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Personally, there is not much more you can do to improve this. Excellent piece of work! Charlier118 (talk) 23:52, 5 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Great job! I can't really think of anything to improve this, it looks awesome. Sydneycurrie5 (talk) 20:36, 7 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]