User talk:Irenez2017
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[edit]Hello, Irenez2017, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Adam and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Adam (Wiki Ed) (talk) 20:12, 23 January 2017 (UTC)
Paolo Schiavo Review
[edit]Right now, it seems that you have not fully developed the article. Your two sources (The Metropolitan Museum of Art and Oxford Art Online - Grove) are reliable sources, so there is surely more information that can be extracted from these sources as well as opportunities to delve into other sources from here. The information given, while seemingly credible, seems to be a bit disjointed. Perhaps you could organize it so that there is a brief lead section and then a table of contents to organize the rest of the article as you add information. It would be helpful to add information about Schiavo's personal life, artistic progression, accomplishments, and legacy.
The use of images in the article is helpful and spices up the information. Perhaps you can connect these images to a history of Schiavo's work in the article.
It is also important that you alter your second citation so that it appears as valid (it currently appears as an invalid citation). Editing this would surely correct the issue. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Hannahhwolfe (talk • contribs) 16:59, 7 March 2017 (UTC)