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[edit]I'm not sure what article you are editing but this seemed pretty good, I only have a few minor suggestions. In the first line you should add a space between Nanos and Oskar in your list. Also, is this entire process explained in the one source that you cite? You might want to add another citation, maybe you could find/add another source that outlines the process. I think that would strengthen your paragraph. But otherwise good job! Jraffy (talk) 14:56, 18 October 2018 (UTC)