User talk:Hrmrlf17

Draft feedback

Hi, you left me a message and I'm replying here. I'm not reviewing drafts anymore, you might want to re-submit and ask another reviewer. Thanks, DrStrauss talk 15:04, 17 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]

August 2017

Hello, and thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia. This is just a note to let you know that I've moved the draft that you were working on to Draft:Louis DeJoy, from its old location at User:Hrmrlf17/sandbox/Louis DeJoy. This has been done because the Draft namespace is the preferred location for Articles for Creation submissions. Please feel free to continue to work on it there. If you have any questions about this, you are welcome to ask me on my talk page. Thank you. KGirl ^{(Wanna chat?)} 16:13, 22 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Louis DeJoy (August 22)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by NewYorkActuary was:

This submission's references do not adequately show the subject's notability. Wikipedia requires significant coverage (not just mere mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject—see the guidelines on the notability of people, the golden rule and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue. Please improve the submission's referencing (see Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners and Help:Introduction to referencing/1), so that the information is verifiable, and there is clear evidence of why the subject is notable and worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia. If additional reliable sources cannot be found for the subject, then it may not be suitable for Wikipedia at this time.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Aside from failing to address he previous concerns about the lack of in-line citations for biographical material, and aside from the rather promotional tone taken in some parts of this draft, there has been no demonstration of notability here. None of the management positions described here create any encyclopedic notability for the subject.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Louis DeJoy and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
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NewYorkActuary (talk) 16:32, 22 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Hello! Hrmrlf17, I noticed your article was declined at Articles for Creation, and that can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! NewYorkActuary (talk) 16:32, 22 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Draft:Louis DeJoy concern

Hi there, I'm HasteurBot. I just wanted to let you know that Draft:Louis DeJoy, a page you created, has not been edited in 5 months. The Articles for Creation space is not an indefinite storage location for content that is not appropriate for articlespace.

If your submission is not edited soon, it could be nominated for deletion. If you would like to attempt to save it, you will need to improve it.

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Thank you for your attention. HasteurBot (talk) 01:31, 1 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft article, Draft:Louis DeJoy

Hello, Hrmrlf17. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Louis DeJoy".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been nominated for deletion. If you plan on working on it further, or editing it to address the issues raised if it was declined, simply edit the submission and remove the {{db-afc}}, {{db-draft}}, or {{db-g13}} code.

If your submission has already been deleted by the time you get there, and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion by following the instructions at this link. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. HasteurBot (talk) 02:00, 3 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]