User talk:Hjpospie/Space system
Lay out corrections
[edit]I made some corrections in this design. Most articles have a typical lay out I just implemented. If you use this, you stay on the save site. One other thing:
You are using this kind of title coding...
= Lay out correction =
...but you should be using titles in one step smaller.
== Lay out correction ==
It is just regular. - Mdd (talk) 13:10, 26 November 2007 (UTC)
The fist sentence
[edit]I have separate the first sentence from the rest, because that sentence need some improvement, and expention. I for expample don't understand what you are trying to say here. - Mdd (talk) 13:13, 26 November 2007 (UTC)