User talk:Hhowar12
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[edit]Hello, Hhowar12, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
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Editing Crawford Long
[edit]Hello Hhowar12, I am amohan12, and wanted to say you did a great job on your article. It was a very interesting read. A couple of minor suggestions: You should perhaps consider increasing the introductory text which is currently only one sentence and does not adequately describe Long's contributions. Lastly, the latter part of the last paragraph "Legacy" is simply a series of facts which are not connected in paragraph form. I would perhaps consider adding these points in bullet form format. Cheers.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 22:25, 7 February 2017 (UTC)
Hi Hannah! Just testing out the talk page. See you tomorrow! Cnpacyna (talk) 23:10, 9 February 2017 (UTC)
Comments on Crawford Long
[edit]Firstly, I'd like to say I quite appreciated the details you have included in the page for Crawford Long. They were very interesting to read. I do, however, have one suggestion. Throughout your contributions, you seemed to list facts in an unlinked manner. If you could somehow weave all the facts together to lead the reader along some sort of thread, it would make your contributions all that much better. That being said, I still enjoyed your work very much. (Diegoluytoto (talk) 02:35, 21 March 2017 (UTC))