User talk:Hhearst
Hello classmate! :)
hey there! im super glad your part of the purple people eaters group!!! Closchen (talk) 05:34, 14 June 2011 (UTC)
Week 2 assignments
[edit]So looking at your edits to Eric Kandel it seems like your critique is weak. I was expecting more.
Also instead of adding a few sentences with a reference, you added a sentence with an "external link" to the amazon product page. So... not so good.
About your list of articles:
- visual neuroscience - This article is so brief that it might be easy to greatly expanded, but I'm also concerned that it might be a synonym for Neuro-ophthalmology and not really a unique article.
- Seymour S. Kety - You had already added this to the class list so I'm going to assume it is your first choice. It looks ripe for improvement so go for it. I'm not really going to evaluate the rest because it looks like we both agree on Kety.
- Eric Kandel
- selective retention
- Michael Gurian
--MTHarden (talk) 14:48, 28 June 2011 (UTC)
Sandbox
[edit]I was looking for a link to your sandbox from your user page (per this assignment. I'll still award you some credit if you get it done this week. Be sure to post on my talk page (in the Week 3 section) after you've completed the assignment. --MTHarden (talk) 16:03, 12 July 2011 (UTC)