User talk:Hennsr
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[edit]Hello, Hennsr, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 16:26, 2 October 2018 (UTC)
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[edit]Great edits! I really did not have a whole lot to edit/add to the work that you added, but I did add some comments for small words to add or delete for clarity purposes. Also, I have some suggestions for potential sections that you could add or you could pose them on the talk page and see if anyone else is interested in adding them. The first is about Snowflake and Snowball, the white American Alligators that are housed at the aquarium because I feel like this exhibit is very unique and sets the Newport Aquarium from other aquariums. Also, you and I talked in class about potentially adding a section about Denver, the sea turtle, because it is extremely rare for aquariums to have sea turtles which I think would be a great addition! But overall, you did a great job editing the article and I found the sections that you added very interesting and relevant! Shislegm (talk) 15:32, 29 October 2018 (UTC)