User talk:Hellotrickster
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[edit]Hello, Hellotrickster, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Adam and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Adam (Wiki Ed) (talk) 14:31, 12 January 2016 (UTC)
Hi there! Your wiki page for Naoko Ogigami is excellent. Some things I noticed that you might want to take another look at: - Referring to the director often as "she" and her" instead of by her last name. I think that is sounds more professional "wiki like" to refer to the director as Ogigami when discussing her and her work. Not to say you shouldn't ever use gender pronouns, but especially when starting a sentence I would use her name. I have made some changes in that respect. -I have tidied up the "style" subheading. It was a bit disjointed. Take a couple of full sentences to explain recurring thematic elements in her work, and maybe expand on what you already have on your page. You mention that her style is different from a lot of other Japanese films, how is it different? (Stereoscope123)