User talk:Hbrewer002
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[edit]Hello, Hbrewer002, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 14:24, 18 September 2019 (UTC)
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[edit]Hi! The edits look good, but I would re-phrase some of the content in the recreational section since it sounds a little like an advertisement of sorts, specifically the use of wording like popular and the visitor education sentence. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 14:54, 22 October 2019 (UTC)