User talk:Harpeet Jessica
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[edit]Hello, Harpeet Jessica, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 17:35, 20 September 2018 (UTC)
Azza Al Hassan
[edit]Major changes necessary.
- The draft is a great start. The structure is good and the tables are nice.
- Right now there are only two sources. You need to find at least one more high-quality source and hopefully several. Since this is a new entry, a minimum of three sources is especially important.
- The citation for source #2 is missing key information. Make sure to add the author's name, date of publication, and the full name of the publisher, Washington Report on Middle East Affairs.
- Obviously, you will need to fill in the "Career" section and flesh out the draft so that it is minimum 500 words of prose.
- Add more information to the Awards section, like the name of the organization giving out the award and where it is based. Also, I saw on IMDB that she was nominated for additional awards. Add these. You can cite IMDB for the Filmography and Awards section if need be.
- Expand the lead section a little to include the awards her films have won.
Chronophoto (talk) 21:52, 15 October 2018 (UTC)
Ways to improve Azza El-Hassan
[edit]Thanks for creating Azza El-Hassan.
A New Page Patroller Rosguill just tagged the page as having some issues to fix, and wrote this note for you:
The article could use more coverage in reliable sources to demonstrate the subject's notability. You may also want to remove the IMDb citation, as it is not considered a reliable source.
The tags can be removed by you or another editor once the issues they mention are addressed. If you have questions, you can reply over here and ping me. Or, for broader editing help, you can talk to the volunteers at the Teahouse.
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signed, Rosguill talk 22:20, 2 November 2018 (UTC)