User talk:Hannahhelm/Patrician (ancient Rome)/JamarcusW Peer Review

JamarcusW thanks for this peer review, it is very positive and encouraging. However, there isn't much for your peer to work on improving - don't be afraid to offer more constructive criticism. This is what I'd like you to work on for your next peer review. This is especially true for articles like the one you reviewed that are generally very good already, because it means you have to dig a little deeper to find critiques for improvement. On this article specifically there were several grammatical issues, despite your comment that 'Grammatically , I was unable to find any errors.' - so make sure you go through these assignments carefully. Lastly, I would have like to see a bit more engagement and suggestions on the topic since your topic is so similar to theirs. Keep this in mind for the future! Grade: 16/20 Gardneca (talk) 13:39, 4 March 2020 (UTC)