User talk:HannahGillis/sandbox
Great start to this article! The only notes I have so far are that there are a few spelling errors that need addressed. Also, I wonder if maybe you're putting too positive of a spin on the subject? While yes, guerrilla art may have been increasing in favor, why do some people still oppose it? You may want to consider expanding more on the other opinions on it. Also, perhaps discuss some of the famous Street artists like Banksy briefly. And I definitely think pictures are in order for this subject to really give a sense of the differences between graffiti and street art that you discuss. Great work so far! ChrissyJensen (talk) 17:31, 16 October 2016 (UTC)
Peer Review
[edit]I thought your lead section was easy to understand and had a clear structure. Perhaps you could elaborate in the lead about the differing opinions and perceptions of those who view the art. The sections are organized well and are in an order that makes sense. Perhaps in the lead you could try to make it more neutral. You state that you will cover the positive effect, what about the negative? I found your article to be very informative and I learned something new about the different forms of art. Thanks!Uhenddo (talk) 19:39, 18 October 2016 (UTC)
Hello!
[edit]I realized I never did the task of introducing myself to someone on here.. better late than never!! So hello! I'm Chrissy! I'm finishing up my last semester at UMASS. I will be obtaining my degree in Psychology. This has definitely been a unique class hasn't it? With having been told to never use Wikipedia in every other class, it feels strange sometimes that we have a whole class dedicated to understanding it. Hope you've had a good semester! ChrissyJensen (talk) 01:10, 29 October 2016 (UTC)