User talk:Hallermb/Vampire squid
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Hi Marisa!
Your edits look great! The citations all look good and the information you added was really interesting. You guys have a lot of information as a group, and everything is well organized.
I thought it was great that you even hyperlinked some of the key words - that was not something I had thought to do before! Overall, I think you have a lot of really strong edits. There was a sentence in the first section that seemed to break off in the middle, but I know you may still be working on the edits, so I figured that might just be a work in progress.
Good job!
Daphne DSB (talk) 15:12, 28 March 2022 (UTC) Daphne