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Nice start on the sustainable landscape architecture article, but it still needs some work. Please take a look at pages 7-9 in the Editing Wikipedia brochure to get a better sense of what the layout should look like.

In general, you shouldn't have external links in the body of the article. You can link to other Wikipedia articles, but links outside of Wikipedia should either be links in references, or be placed in the "External links" section at the bottom of the page.

You should generally use sentences and paragraphs rather than bullet points. While bullet points are useful in cases where everyone knows what you're talking about, in an encyclopedia article aimed at general audiences, you need to go into more depth. Either explain what you're talking about, or link to another Wikipedia article where your readers can learn more about the topic.

As much as possible, you should rely on high-quality sources like peer-reviewed literature and books from academic publishers. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 13:33, 14 December 2017 (UTC)