User talk:H. Walter

Feedback on Carnegie_Foundation_for_the_Advancement_of_Teaching#6_Improvement_Science_Principles

Hi! I'm the content expert for your class - your professor asked me to give you some feedback.

Offhand the section you added looks very good. My only pointers would be to make sure that you be careful of flow and that you write out the full names of the researchers you're referring to, especially in the case of people who have articles, as this way you can link to their Wikipedia entries. That's pretty much all that I have to point out here - good job! Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 06:00, 3 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Hi! Just following up - the addition still looks good! Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 04:38, 10 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]