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Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia! Excirial^{(Contact me,Contribs)} 19:05, 19 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Liberty Holdings Limited

Good day

Please assist me with the following, I username (group comms) recently made changes to the (liberty group holdings) page but this was declined (too commercial). The company (Liberty) instructed me to post the new copy as is (they wrote the copy because they wanted to refresh the first couple of lines on their page), I was merely posting it on their behalf. My question is how do I ensure that the copy gets published?

Group comms (talk) 07:10, 20 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Hello there Group comms,

Since you mentioned "Changes" i figure you are referring to the Liberty Holdings Limited article? If that is the case there are multiple issues i should comment on here:

First and foremost, a company should stay away from their own article since they have a conflict of interest with the subject, especially if the change they intend to make is promotional.
The change you posted in the Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Liberty Holdings Limited article will never fly in its current form, as it is an advertisement for the company itself, which is against the advertising and neutral point of view policy.
The Liberty Holdings Limited itself is currently marked as lacking lacking references and as being written as an advertisement. If Liberty Holdings Limited would want to change their article, i would suggest focusing on improving its references first, since those are ultimately what allows a company to be on Wikipedia. Without reliable sources someone may eventually challenge the article itself, which may lead to its removal.

Kind regards, Excirial^{(Contact me,Contribs)} 17:24, 22 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Good day

Thanks for the feedback about my article. Are there perharps any examples you could recommend of similar financial institutions that are well written (neutral) and referenced that I could check out, in order for me to be able to change the article accordingly.

Thanks, Group comms (talk) 15:41, 23 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

would recommend modeling the article after a GA qualified article, since these have been checked for quality of writing, references et cetera. My favorite examples are Pearson's Candy Company and Pike Place Fish Market, because they are well written decently referenced, while also being quite short (thus reading them doesn't take ages). They are not financial companies, but the basis for each company article is more or less the same. Having said that - every article on the GA page can serve as an example, so there may be some examples specific for financial companies as well.

Kind regards, Excirial^{(Contact me,Contribs)} 18:06, 23 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

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