User talk:Gretsch whitepanther
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[edit]Hello, Gretsch whitepanther, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Adam and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
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[edit]Good lead section. I think you should minimize the amount of references you use (wikilinks). Wikipedia also states that a lead section should include information that was given a heading or subheading. "If a topic deserves a heading or subheading, then it deserves short mention in the lead" Mcguirlm (talk) 14:40, 19 February 2016 (UTC)mcguirlm
Good intro, just add more headings by chopping up the history sections into different eras maybe. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Djneedssleep (talk • contribs) 14:45, 19 February 2016 (UTC)