User talk:Green desert scrub/sandbox

Miriam's peer review

The article's lead section gives a good overview sentence of what is expected of this wiki page it does a good job of showcasing where this cycle will be taking place. There are plenty of wiki links to other pages that define important terms in this article. This article does a good job of breaking down the important sources in this cycle in an easily digestible way. It does an excellent job of detailing where the highest concentrations of sources are locating in the upper continental and oceanic crust. It also discusses the ways that lithium is removed from the earth and is incorporated and it explains where the sources primarily release lithium onto the earth's surface. The author does a good job of not appearing bias with the information which offers a good balance of scientific jargon and layman's terms in explanations. The figure is simple and neat that gives a great overall illustration of the lithium cycle. The figure caption gives a really good overview of the cycle and includes citations. On the figure perhaps the author could add a title and make the arrows different sizes to show the difference influxes. Shannonsalter (talk) 16:22, 26 March 2021 (UTC) Shannon