User talk:GrantDrum/Palermo
Evaluations
[edit]2/28/2018 Evaluation by Kyeanna Henry
[edit]Spelling/Grammar
Meets standard. There are a few grammatical mistakes (Patron Saints paragraph 4, Sports paragraph 2 second sentence, Capital Culture last sentence, and Mafia last sentence) that can be improved before sending in the final draft. No spelling errors.
Language
Exceeds standard. Good tone.
Organization
Exceeds standard. Very well organized.
Coding
Exceeds standard.
Validity
Exceeds standard.
Completion
Meets standard. A few more sources needed to meet the minimum requirement.
Relevance
Meets standard.
Sources
Nearly meets standard. A few more sources needed to meet the minimum requirement. (I believe we need 15 sources)
Citations
Exceeds standard.
References
Meets standard.
Spelling/Grammar
[edit]Meets standard. You should revise some portions of writing and check for a couple of grammatical errors that showed up.
Language
[edit]Exceeds standard. You did a great job writing and expressing your ideas.
Organization
[edit]Meets standard. I think that the organization of your writing is well done.
Coding
[edit]Exceeds standard. Good.
Validity
[edit]Exceeds standard. Valid information
Completion
[edit]Meets standard. Complete.
Relevance
[edit]Meets standard. Information is relevant. Nice job.
Sources
[edit]Exceeds standard. More than enough sources.
Citations
[edit]Exceeds standard. Great citations.
References
[edit]Exceeds standard. Relevant and adequate references.