User talk:Gkw619/sandbox
Comments on draft
[edit]Style issues
[edit]- Look over the explanation for dealing with disambiguation on Wikipedia (Wikipedia:Disambiguation). I don't see a reason to disambiguate here. Disambiguation is inserted as a code, not a section heading, and is used when the same word refers to two different things.
- Change bold all caps to Sentence case, no bold, in headings
Writing
[edit]- Edit for sentence fragments. First one is bolded; there are several more.
- The word "revolution" sounds like advertising language - edit to be more neutral.
- I edited one heading to read just Design. The current heading Background may be better as Applications. Current Application section seems to be about Types of drillships.
Additions
[edit]Current draft (looking at new content) is less than 1000 words. I've marked areas where you could add some more information. The Design section would really benefit from a photo or drawing - any available?
References/Sources
[edit]Edit information that projects into the future. This will very quickly become out of date, or already is. Replace projections with actual data, especially when referring to a previous time. There are likely professional organizations that keep track of drillship construction, drilling operations, etc. A .org/.gov search and/or searching for current trade magazine articles in ABI/Inform should yield more solid data.