User talk:Gjeffrey18/sandbox/Draft 1 Memo
- I think that the order of the article seems right. I think the section on nuclear energy is appropriately placed after the rest of the energy sources, given that its not a source that Italy uses.
-The section on fossil fuels although small contains a good breakdown. I think a few more statistics could help increase the size of this sub-section. Maybe a bit on if Italy is trying to reduce their fossil fuel usage, since it seems that they're increasing renewables.
-I think that the section on renewable sources is a good length and covers alot on Italy's increase in renewable energy sources
-The section on cost seems like it fits where it is since I do not think it would fit after the section on History. It makes sense for it to be right after the breakdown of sources.
- I think the article is formatted properly. For some reason I like the idea of the History section going first, but looking at the pages on the Electricity sectors for Japan, the US and the UK, the modes of production usually come first. For some reason, most electricity sector pages for other countries don't contain a section on history.
-As a side note, the percentages for renewables and fossil fuel energy production in 2012 don't add up to 100%
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