User talk:Gilly22

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Hello from me!

Thank you for coming along today. Don't forget to do the tutorials in the Dashboard, and I'll see you next week! Cbderbylib (talk) 12:23, 5 February 2019 (UTC)[reply]

A barnstar for you!

	The Copyeditor's Barnstar
	A copyeditor barnstar for you, for a great start! Cbderbylib (talk) 12:26, 5 February 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Peter Parker Article Feedback

Hi Andy

The article is generally very well-written but some copyediting is needed. For example, the second paragraph of the lead section begins 'Peter is depicted as an intellectually-gifted and bright.' Is 'man' supposed to be at the end of the sentence? The lead section/introduction is quite long and could be shortened. Some of the introduction seems like plot so that could be added to another section. It is generally well-structured but some specific comments were: remove the empty notes section, more headings/subheading would add even more structure and there was a suggestion to include all Peter Parker's appearances to the Infobox, not just his first and last. The enemies section is very lengthy so could be shortened, whilst the Reception section could be slightly longer to match the length of the Creation section. Wikilinks are well-used throughout the article. Coverage is balances, mostly neutral and unbiased but someone also noticed some use of opinionated language. Competing viewpoints are well represented though someone commented that more sources could be used in the Reception section. Good choice of sources - varied and well-selected - but more could be used when looking at the length of the overall article. General consensus is we have no idea if the images are okay to use???? No copyright violations but it was suggested that the longer quote could be paraphrased. No subjective statements!

Cxssbailey (talk) 11:36, 26 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]