User talk:Giacorbett/Deforestation in Madagascar

Overall I found the article to be very informative. All of the citations seem to work fine. I'm assuming you didn't find the first three citations because it was before what you added. In case you did citation 3 didn't work. The first part of the article seems a little choppy so recommend combining some of the sentences so it flows better. Another thing is I would talk more about the effects of deforestation had on lemurs less about where certain species of lemurs came from. It seemed to take away from the main point of the article. Other than those two things it was good the tone was neutral and everything was backed up by facts. Good Job! (Lheiler02 (talk) 01:09, 3 December 2020 (UTC))

The article is really well done. You did a really good job of keeping a neutral tone and citing all of your sources. I think you incorporated some really relevant and important information into the article. The information on the various forests provides good context for the current state of lemur biodiversity. Further incorporating their effect on local biodiversity is also very useful. The only thing I would change is the last citation as well as making your sentences flow a bit better. Great article! --LU1R6 (talk) 02:42, 3 December 2020 (UTC)