User talk:Gfrench55clu/sandbox

This was very informative and written well without bias. Good work and I don't really see anything that needs to be changed or corrected. Cakers12 (talk) 16:09, 24 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft for your article is very well written. All of the sources look to be good secondary sources to use. My only suggestion would be to reword the last sentence of the first paragraph. The manner in which it is phrased makes it sound like you are drawing that conclusion instead of reciting the conclusion that the article made. Matt Tosa (talk) 18:44, 24 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]