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Hello,
Thank you for your peer review. I will definitely take in consideration your suggestions. And to be honest, I never knew that word, "Jews" could be offensive! now I know and won't happen again.
As for your page, I noticed that you have clear structure, relatively balanced coverage and I find your contents neutral. Your sources are reliable, may I suggest that you add a lead section.
Degetsering (talk) 15:12, 15 April 2016 (UTC) Tsering