User talk:Gbern10/Carlyle S. Smith

This is a really nice and thorough entry. You've made nice use of Smith's autobiographical works, with less from his other publications or writings about him by other people. There are some inconsistencies throughout in the way that you refer to him, including "Smith," "C.S. Smith," and "Carlyle." I think that "Smith" is fine throughout, since there will be no confusion about to whom you're referring. I think that you could include many more hyperlinks throughout to related and relevant articles. I will make some editorial corrections in Wikipedia, but I think this entry is just about ready for Wikipedia mainspace. Once it is in mainspace, you should consider adding backlinks to this article from other relevant ones. Hoopes (talk) 20:01, 19 October 2014 (UTC)