User talk:FwdF

some comments on your sandbox

Hi Francesco. Please allow me to make some general remarks about what you have put in your sandbox until now:

Very interesting! Clearly written. But perhaps you could give the article a bit more what I would like to call an “encyclopedic” style. See: Wikipedia:Writing_better_articles, en especially the paragraphs on style and on providing context.
Do you plan to make your text an article in itself, or integrate it in an existing article, for instance Social_peer-to-peer_processes?
You only mention one source (and not the complete reference to it). But I understand from the text that you used more.
Perhaps you can enhance the referencing. See: Help:Referencing_for_beginners. (there are hundreds of help pages on Wikipedia; but how to find your way in all these pages....)
The article lacks wiki-links until now.

Good luck with it. Sorry, but I can't be in your class next Friday. Greetings, --Dick Bos (talk) 09:50, 26 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Hi,

I moved the section on communities in your sandbox to peer-to-peer file sharing today. Greetz, --Dick Bos (talk) 08:01, 14 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]