User talk:Fvialard
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[edit]Hello, Fvialard, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 02:27, 17 October 2017 (UTC)
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[edit]I fixed it - it was some sort of invisible character. Your reference, though, is to a Google cache, not to the actual document. Your actual source is here: https://www.fda.gov/downloads/animalveterinary/guidancecomplianceenforcement/guidanceforindustry/ucm052662.pdf
You should use the manual option on the cite tool and fill in the reference by hand, since pdfs don't auto-generate very good references most of the time. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 14:47, 14 November 2017 (UTC)
- Thank you Ian I will do that. I also had another question: I noticed that the article has a B grade, would you have any advice on how to improve that mark. apart from making sure we reference well and making it more neutral. Thank you in advance!
- Which article are you working on? As for being ranked as "B" in quality, that's the highest ranking an article can get without going through a review process. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 20:50, 15 November 2017 (UTC)
- I am working on the Raw Feeding article and okay thank you
- Which article are you working on? As for being ranked as "B" in quality, that's the highest ranking an article can get without going through a review process. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 20:50, 15 November 2017 (UTC)
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[edit]Nice work on your draft.
The "At home" section includes instructions for how to make raw food. Since "how-to" instructions are not permitted in Wikipedia articles (see WP:NOTGUIDE for more details) you need to remove that section.
In the same section, you also write
Unfortunately, homemade diets are hard to balance properly and can be associated with poor nutrition.
Wikipedia articles are supposed to be written from a neutral point of view, so you should avoid opinions like "unfortunately". While I hope everyone would feel that way, Wikipedia should not take a position on whether this is a good or bad thing. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 21:45, 29 November 2017 (UTC)
- Hello Ian. Thank you for your feedback Fvialard (talk) 16:33, 30 November 2017 (UTC)