User talk:Fionnloch
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Your submission at Articles for creation: Draft:Monstrous Regiment Theatre Company (July 23)
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Hello! Fionnloch,
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Monstrous Regiment
[edit]Hello there! Thank you for your note on my talk page. You are spot-on with your identification of the phrasing issues - really the three phrases you mentioned are the only problematic ones. I recommend replacing "resolved" and "incensed" with some other word and either removing the bit about "women’s lives and experiences were placed centre-stage" or, if a lot of people describe the company that way, making it a quote. We just can't have that line in Wikipedia's voice. I'm sorry if I threw you off with that message about advertising, I think it would have been more apt to just say that some bits of the article are non-neutral in tone. If you make those corrections the article should be ready for article-space. Let me know when you resubmit it and I'll take another look. --Cerebellum (talk) 21:41, 28 July 2014 (UTC)
Your submission at AfC Monstrous Regiment Theatre Company was accepted
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Cerebellum (talk) 16:13, 29 July 2014 (UTC)