User talk:Fantasticfox97/sandbox
Hey Calla -
Really great work on adding important and relevant information to this Wikipedia page! I made a few grammatical and phrasing updates that you can see reflected on the Wikipedia page itself to make things sound more neutral. Additionally, I had some recommendations and thoughts on areas of your research/input you could further expound upon.
For the "In the arts" section, I would add more research, information and examples of marijuana/cannabis reference and influence in music culture. Some ideas could be to provide examples of previous and current music examples of marijuana in popular culture and how the history of its depiction (like the lyrics of Louis Armstrong or Snoop Dogg). You could also add in pictures of popular artists who helped to bring cannabis culture mainstream into all music genres (like Snoop Dogg, Miley Cyrus, Kacey Musgraves) and find research that supports that.
For the "United States" section, I'd add more research about the colonial era and make that a new subsection.
For the Women and Cannabis section, I'd provide more examples and historical context of how women's role in cannabis has progressed throughout history (one modern example is Martha Stewart's current product line of CBD oils and gummies).
Really interesting social science topic and a great first draft!
Thanks! Charlotte
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