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Your submission at Articles for creation: A Measure of Shape and Sounds (August 7)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Dan arndt was:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of music-related topics). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Fails the requirements of WP:NALBUM - the sources/references need to be about this album not previous albums. Also the sources need to be reliable and independent. The JFH reference is a press release by the record label and therefore not independent. The V13 reference is essentially an interview with Foster which is a primary source and therefore not independent either.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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Dan arndt (talk) 07:31, 7 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Estefaniepujols! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Dan arndt (talk) 07:31, 7 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Dan, didn't have the chance before, but made the changes to the article -- much easier now that album has been released and more reviews came in. It has been submitted again for review. If this is again rejected, I may very well head over to teahouse. thanks! Estefaniepujols (talk) 16:28, 3 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: A Measure of Shape and Sounds (November 17)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Qcne was:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Well done on creating this draft, and it is certainly notable. However I notice a lot of emotive language is used and is not directly attributed as a quote to the source, and is instead written in the Wikipedia voice. Ensure that all emotive language is removed and directly quote and cite if you want to include quotations from sources.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:A Measure of Shape and Sounds and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
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qcne (talk) 21:49, 17 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]