User talk:Erinhorne/sandbox

Hey so this looks great so far. I have one thing that you could add to the "In popular culture" portion of the Hawaiian pizza article that could expand your word count and and make your life easier. Hawaiian pizza was a topic discussed in the fifth episode of the popular john green podcast Anthropocene reviewed. In it he basically suggests Hawaiian pizza is a metaphor for globalization. As john green is a popular figure, i suspect it will reach the notability requirement for Wikipedia. Here's the citation. I had initially left that message in the sandbox and not the talk page.

Terrycrewsleftpeck (talk) —Preceding undated comment added 15:58, 6 April 2019 (UTC)

Erin, this is a great start, it seems like the perfect article for you. You seem to have a good understanding of where the article needs improvement. Maybe try finding a couple more sources to strengthen your improvements even further. I can't wait to see the finished product.

-Ayanna

Erin, you have done a great job completing additions for the original article. I enjoyed that you informed the audience that Hawaiian pizza is both sweet and savoury, as people that have not tried it would not know this. Hawaiian pizza is known for being controversial and is definitely a necessary fact that should be added in the Hawaiian Pizza Article. Well done! ~ ~ ~ ~

Erin, you have done a great job completing additions for the original article. I enjoyed that you informed the audience that Hawaiian pizza is both sweet and savoury, as people that have not tried it would not know this. Hawaiian pizza is known for being controversial and is definitely a necessary fact that should be added in the Hawaiian Pizza Article. Well done! -Rosie Conforti