User talk:Erikameraz764/sandbox
Cierra Garrett
[edit]- Nice pictures and the informational table looks great!
- Spell check article
- When discussing surgery statistics or prognosis percentages, add some real statistics and cite them. Example: 86% of penetrating keratoplasties are successful, the other 14% experience (input complications)
- Add a real-life picture of the eye with the disease
CierraGarrett (talk) 01:21, 13 November 2024 (UTC)
Julian Estrada
[edit]- Abstract could benefit from history and prevalence surrounding the topic presented
- Siting throughout the Wikipedia article, possible addition of more reliable sources if available
- For research directions, could be in need of presenting case studies for this condition/ clinical trials or researchers
- Wikipedia article is coherent and well established!