User talk:Eobina/sandbox
Your addition of an example to the 'Place Identity' page, I think, helps give readers a better understanding of the concept and how it is applied. This is a good draft that just needs a little bit more development. I would suggest adding an additional introduction sentence indicting the name of the study and the individual(s) who conducted it. I also believe that further developing the connection between the example and the already-existing lead section will strengthen your example. There is a fragment sentence being with "Open-ended responses...". Maybe tie this to the previous sentence? Otherwise, this is a great start to your addition to the page!
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